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Good news, I have finally had the time to right a new chapter. It's the most experimental so far and I'm not sure how it'll be received, but if the worst happens I have plans for more vanilla future chapters anyway.

Here it is!

Nice one....piss fetish of hazel really turned me on

Thanks. I still have lots of things on my to do list in the novel but if you have any more ideas please tell me. I really enjoy making these chapters based on people's requests.

Try some kitchen or bathroom sex...

Sex during periods ...

Some lesbian action will also be good...like johnny in bondage nd watching girls having fun

Nice ideas, thanks.

I realised I wasn't being as transparent with the writing of the story. I am about to start writing chapter eight, Liz And Amina, which as you may expect has the threesome set up at the end of the previous chapter. Usually when I finish a chapter I do not know what I will write next so I go to my to-do list or look for ideas here, but this time I've decided to set in stone what I'm going to write for chapters nine and ten. Chapter nine, called Initiating (not to be confused with Initiation, the first chapter) is effectively the first chapter but from the other point of view - this time Johnny will be watching and judging an initiation. The chapter will also see the return of Anna who hasn't been in the book much since the first chapter, and there will probably be an encounter between the two. I may be able to work on the requests to have bathroom or kitchen sex with this chapter.

Chapter ten, tentatively called From Boys To Men (I may change the name later), is a gangbang with Bennett, Ty and possibly Frost and the male member of staff from chapter two, although I'm not sure who the girl will be (suggestions would be nice - either I can use existing chapters or can create a new one based on your requests*). The chapter will also have a bukkake and anal.

*Something I'd like to do in general is use your ideas for characters of all types. Other members of Perseus (male and female), staff, characters from outside, whatever. Just so long as they're not based on real people and unique compared to other characters I can put them in. If you're into it I could even do transgender characters, which I have avoided so far because it isn't what I'm into - but I'm not into pissing much either and I wrote about that...

Something else I have been working on is an ongoing project to map Perseus. The one attached to this post includes everything from the existing chapters and ones that were deleted (the spa and mud bath for example). This map doesn't have any real value other than helping you figure out where everything is.

Here's a bit of the next chapter:

CHAPTER EIGHT – LIZ AND AMINA

“Damn, you two are hot!” is what I wrote in my reply to Amina’s request for a threesome.

“So, are you down?” She replied.

“Totally. When and where?” I texted her.

“I can easily book one of the brothel rooms if you want.”

“Deal” I responded eagerly.

The brothel rooms were where I had my exciting encounter with Emma some time ago. If that was anything to go by my time with Liz and Amina would be just as good, if not better.

“Come in the next hour if you can. We’ll be waiting.” She beamed to my phone.

She’d attached another image. It was a surprisingly high quality photo of a pussy, just not hers. It had to be Liz’. It was trimmed but not clean shaven, and Liz had taken the time to have it pierced – I wondered how it would feel when our bodies were touching. That piercing must have been painful though; it went straight through the lips.

Worries aside, an hour later I knocked on the door to the room Amina had specified. I had been feeling cold so I had broken Perseus’ no-clothes policy and worn enough clothing to warm me up just a little. Liz opened the door wearing nothing but bondage ropes around her chest. However, I was drawn first to her breasts – they were enormous. The largest I’d seen so far at Perseus. Underneath them was a large tattoo of a corn snake. An odd choice of snake I thought, considering corn snakes are harmless to humans.

“Why the corn snake?” I asked her.

“Corn snakes kill by choking their prey to death. I like being choked.”

“I see…”

Good reasoning, I thought, although I’m still certain it was an explanation she came up with after realising the tattoo artist had unknowingly drawn a harmless snake on her body.

That’s enough about snakes though. On the bed Amina was sitting naked against the headboard, a vibrator against her clitoris. I doubt she’d even noticed me by the time I got to her, as she was clearly in her own world about to reach orgasm. I didn’t want to interrupt. Cries erupted from her as she got wetter, the climax invigorating her whole body.

“Did you enjoy that?” I asked her.

“Yes, sorry, I was just passing the time while we were waiting for you.”

“You don’t need to apologise,” I reassured her, “but even if you did I’ll be forgiving you not long from now.”

Liz smacked me on the bottom and jumped on the bed. “Don’t worry Johnny, I’ll be punishing Amina more than enough.” Liz did a fake bite at Amina. I think I like being around Liz.

“So what do you two plan on doing to me?” I asked, pretending to be worried.

Liz got up and walked over to me, wrapping her arms around my waist and placing her hands on the legs of my trousers. “Well, I’m dominant, Amina’s a sub, so what are you? Tell me, Joh-”

She stopped herself as I insert my finger into her vagina and explored. She was wet.

“Switch.” I told her.

Liz took the message. “Lie on the bed.” I did as she asked.

“Amina,” she said, “Sit on his face.”

Amina did as she said, sitting on my face. Her butt was right above my mouth, so I gave it a lick.

“Oh my god,” Amina cried, “I didn’t know I put my butt there, I’m sorry.”

“Don’t apologise, I’ve never done this before.”

I couldn’t see much because her back was in my way, but I could imagine Amina’s sexy brown skin starting to sweat with every lick. Liz rewarded me for my work. She inserted my whole penis into her mouth and sucked it. I felt the back of her throat as she sucked my dick.

Here is the next chapter!

Here is the map I forgot to attach previously.

And this is a little side project which includes eight files on people in Perseus relating to their initiations or character.

I've been wondering... I believe Perseus is reaching its end now and soon I'll want to write about something else, a sequel perhaps. Maybe it could follow Johnny outside of Perseus, or perhaps new characters altogether. I have some ideas for settings but I'm not sure if they'd work. Do any of you have any potential ideas for me to work on?

I think you should end this Johnny story here. And start a fresh one with all new characters and set up.

May be some college romance type.