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Hmm... University does seem like a good setting, I'll try and core up with some ideas for that one.

As for Perseus I'm already writing a new chapter so I'm not going to cancel it, but I think the story is closer to the end that start now.

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30/12/2022 2:21 pm
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So I've been having a think and have some ideas, although before I explain them, a question: do all of you prefer the format of Johnny In Perseus (individual encounters with different characters tied together by a loose story) or a more story-based format. I wonder because the ideas below differ in the format they'd be written in.

Anyway, the ideas. The university idea was one that interested me, but I wanted to add a bit more. A potential time period to set this is in the future, in a Cyberpunk-esque setting, but this can be changed as cool as it is. The main character joins university and in my first draft idea becomes a bit of a player before getting involved with a fraternity that 'secretly' is involved in the sex industry, and potentially the main character gets involved with the world of porn and erotic photography outside of university. This project would likely be closer format-wise to Johnny In Perseus, but unlike in the current project where Perseus is introduced from the very start, the frat sex industry plotline would come later in the story, perhaps a third to a half of the way through the story.

The next idea was my original idea, and this is far more story-based, in some cases being more story than erotica. The idea here is slightly less developed, but there is a basic plot nevertheless. I don't want to spoil it but it involves the main character investigating the cheating of his girlfriend, and subsequently getting involved in cheating himself and the ethical dilemmas because of that.

The third idea is the one I want to do least. I have toned down the idea for the sake of this thread, removing a bunch of detail about the setting, because the full idea would just not work for an erotic novel and would be far better as a TV show or 'proper' novel. The toned down version is set in the Regency Era in the UK (for those unaware this is the time period Bridgerton is set in). I already have characters and plotlines for this so I already know what would happen, but I am open to new ideas. Anyway, there are four subplots going on, following four couples. The first couple are in love but neither his or her families are happy with it so they have to keep their relationship mostly secret. In the TV show version, the second couple have a one-night stand at a ball and accidentally fall in love afterwards, and their story is them becoming okay with the idea of it and accepting their love for each other. The third couple involves an attractive woman seducing a man and effectively playing games with him to make his life a misery (this is one of the reasons this idea would work better as a novel or TV show; how I'd make this work in erotica I do not know). The last couple is one of the reasons why this idea would work as erotica, as this involves a woman who is engaged to be married to a man meeting a woman who subsequently makes her realise she's a lesbian, and the two of them have an affair while trying to keep it a secret.

The last story would jump between the different couples and be told in the third person, and the third person is likely how the other two ideas would be told unlike Perseus which is from the first person. Out of the three ideas I'd like to work on the first idea the most, but if you can convince me to do one of the others then I'll do them.

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31/12/2022 1:51 am
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Okay, I have figured out how the Perseus/new story transition will work. I am half-way done on the next chapter of Perseus, and Perseus writing will continue for a little while. Until this point these were the upcoming chapters for Perseus:

  1. Chapter 9 (Initiating): Johnny conducts an initiation himself with the help of Anna (this is the chapter I am working on now).
  2. From Boys To Men: Gangbang with Johnny and other characters from the story
  3. Unnamed eleventh chapter: Something to do with the brothel section of Perseus. This area has been explored before; this is where Johnny and Emma had sex in the second chapter. I had previously hinted in the story that there would be a section that involved sex with prostitutes in this part of Perseus.
  4. Unnamed twelfth chapter: Another romantic chapter with Emma, which would have been based on a fantasy from when I was younger.
  5. Ending: While not intended to be chapter thirteen, I have already planned the ending and it would be the same no matter when it came.

However, I have decided to cut down on future chapters for Perseus - including the one I'm already working on, three more chapters of Johnny In Perseus will come out, those being Initiating, From Boys To Men and the unnamed final chapter. The brothel chapter will be moved to the new story, and the romantic chapter will likely be ditched altogether as it does not fit the new theme. The new story will be in the same universe as Perseus, although as the new story will be set in the future I doubt any characters from Perseus will have major roles in the new story.

Until I have a better name, the new story will be called FR4T (pronounced Frat), and soon I will be uploading my stories to a website to help me grow to an audience outside of Elite Babes.

Also happy new year everybody!

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31/12/2022 10:02 pm
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Chapter nine is here! It's among the longer chapters, and in some ways I feel it should have been two, but it's done now so enjoy.

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02/01/2023 11:15 pm
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I have started work on the penultimate chapter of Perseus, which is currently the most ambitious to date, although we'll have to wait and see if it's as good as I want it to be. FR4T, the indirect sequel to Johnny In Perseus has also started, with my friend helping with worldbuilding and the first chapter already started.

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07/01/2023 11:38 pm
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The final two chapters of Perseus are done. I will be uploading them in the next few days, as I want to have enough of FR4T to include as a bonus chapter.

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27/01/2023 12:23 am
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Here it is - the final two chapters of Perseus, with a note from me and a bonus chapter from FR4T at the end. I will probably be taking a break from writing for a little while in order to come up with ideas for my new projects. As usual, if you spot any mistakes in Perseus please tell me so I can correct them. But otherwise, hopefully you'll enjoy the story in its full form.

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29/01/2023 2:03 am
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Finally, I have finished the first chapter of FR4T. Reading this chapter you may notice the darker tone of the story, which will become clearer later on in the story's writing. The first chapter serves as an introduction to the futuristic world. Jack, the main character and (SPOILER ALERT FOR JOHNNY IN PERSEUS) is the son of Johnny and Emma, but lives in a different society to the one we have now. This setting will be expanded upon over the story. In the first chapter Jack meets his former best friend and on-and-off girlfriend Brooke and model Dee, but this chapter is not what you will expect. This will become clear later on.

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07/03/2023 7:40 pm
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And here is chapter 2, which introduces a new character and also has the first proper sex scene of the story. It also features a returning character from Perseus but I'll leave you to find out who.

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12/03/2023 12:15 am
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I've also made some more edits to Johnny In Perseus, including some major corrections. If you're interested I have attached it here.

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12/03/2023 12:16 am
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It took far longer than it should have, but finally here is chapter 3. Enjoy!

Something else worth talking about is that I want to experiment more with my writing. So if any of you have a suggestion for a fetish or sex act to explore, please tell me and I can put it in the story.

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12/04/2023 3:19 am
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