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While we wait for sockitboy to potentially release his erotic writing, I'm going to start my own project using my writing skills. Does anyone have any ideas? I have some basic concepts but I always like getting input from others.

Well, I have now completed the first part of my story. The scope of the story has expanded significantly since I first conceived the project and now there is almost a fully-fledged 'universe' in the story. The story itself is from the protagonist's point of view. Johnny gets involved in a secret club for the elite, where only thirty normal people every year get chosen to join. The club is an exclusive massage parlour, brothel and sex club that is meant to be heaven for those who get to attend. Only the most beautiful people on the planet are allowed in and everybody is a potential partner of everybody else. The service is beyond 5-stars. It goes by the suitably exclusive name Perseus, and in the first chapter attached to this post* Johnny needs to impress 'judges' to get himself selected for Perseus. Along the way he meets three other hopefuls, and I hope you can imagine what happens. The story is by no means finished and there are issues with the PDF export with fonts, but I will fix that in later versions. Enjoy!

*When new versions are released I may ask the mods for previous releases to be removed, and all downloads will be removed should I release the story on storefronts such as iBooks or Kindle. Remember that this is my story, so you are not allowed to modify the story or claim it is yours. However, I will definitely take any suggestions on board. I'd like Johnny In Perseus to be a community project and as a result community input is important.

Posted by: @electrostar

Well, I have now completed the first part of my story. The scope of the story has expanded significantly since I first conceived the project and now there is almost a fully-fledged 'universe' in the story. The story itself is from the protagonist's point of view. Johnny gets involved in a secret club for the elite, where only thirty normal people every year get chosen to join. The club is an exclusive massage parlour, brothel and sex club that is meant to be heaven for those who get to attend. Only the most beautiful people on the planet are allowed in and everybody is a potential partner of everybody else. The service is beyond 5-stars. It goes by the suitably exclusive name Perseus, and in the first chapter attached to this post* Johnny needs to impress 'judges' to get himself selected for Perseus. Along the way he meets three other hopefuls, and I hope you can imagine what happens. The story is by no means finished and there are issues with the PDF export with fonts, but I will fix that in later versions. Enjoy!

*When new versions are released I may ask the mods for previous releases to be removed, and all downloads will be removed should I release the story on storefronts such as iBooks or Kindle. Remember that this is my story, so you are not allowed to modify the story or claim it is yours. However, I will definitely take any suggestions on board. I'd like Johnny In Perseus to be a community project and as a result community input is important.

 perseusc1.pdf

Really nice work dude...your story really turned me on

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Posted by: @electrostar

Well, I have now completed the first part of my story. The scope of the story has expanded significantly since I first conceived the project and now there is almost a fully-fledged 'universe' in the story. The story itself is from the protagonist's point of view. Johnny gets involved in a secret club for the elite, where only thirty normal people every year get chosen to join. The club is an exclusive massage parlour, brothel and sex club that is meant to be heaven for those who get to attend. Only the most beautiful people on the planet are allowed in and everybody is a potential partner of everybody else. The service is beyond 5-stars. It goes by the suitably exclusive name Perseus, and in the first chapter attached to this post* Johnny needs to impress 'judges' to get himself selected for Perseus. Along the way he meets three other hopefuls, and I hope you can imagine what happens. The story is by no means finished and there are issues with the PDF export with fonts, but I will fix that in later versions. Enjoy!

*When new versions are released I may ask the mods for previous releases to be removed, and all downloads will be removed should I release the story on storefronts such as iBooks or Kindle. Remember that this is my story, so you are not allowed to modify the story or claim it is yours. However, I will definitely take any suggestions on board. I'd like Johnny In Perseus to be a community project and as a result community input is important.

 perseusc1.pdf

Really nice work dude...your story really turned me on

 

Thanks. I have completed the second chapter; I'll release it later today.

Can i share real life experiences??

Yes, of course. Although make sure to change the names of people involved.

CHAPTER TWO NOW AVAILABLE

Chapter two 'Inside Emma' has been complete for a few days now but I didn't want to release it just yet. Chapter two is in fact formed of two shorter chapters which were directly after each other in the story. Therefore I combined them to make chapter two, which is slightly longer than the first. An updated chapter one is also included in the file with fixes and font updates. Chapter 2 follows Johnny on his first day in Perseus, during which has a hot massage with a happy ending and has sex with Emma, one of the girls from the first chapter. I'd recommend new readers to read chapter one first as it gives significant context to the story; Johnny In Perseus is not just erotic writing - there is a bit of a story here which does become relevant at times.

The next two chapters have been written but I am likely going to delete them or heavily edit them as they are either written poorly or delve into kinks and fetishes that I don't think that many readers will be interested in. If you have any thoughts on this please tell me. For those interested in these chapters, Lucy and Bennett from the first chapter and they are joined by two new Asian girls, Nancy and Audrey.

 Wow,very impressive I better get to work then and get the gears turning if I'm going to post anything remotely as well written and enjoyable to read.....not to mention stimulating lol

Posted by: @sockitboy

 Wow,very impressive I better get to work then and get the gears turning if I'm going to post anything remotely as well written and enjoyable to read.....not to mention stimulating lol

Thanks. I usually struggle with writing projects as I have a short attention span, but I have done surprisingly well here, likely because it 'stimulated' me as I was writing it. As for the deleted chapters, I will release them eventually in their incomplete states once the rest of the story is done.

 Nice one,I can't wait. Well the bar has well and truly been raised right from the off 🙂

Posted by: @sockitboy

 Nice one,I can't wait. Well the bar has well and truly been raised right from the off 🙂

I'm currently writing the third chapter. It takes inspiration from the cancelled chapters, including the new characters, but is much more approachable.

As for the bar being raised, I'd still love to see what others have written. Not only is it more erotica to enjoy, but it will help me gain inspiration for my own project. Remember that I see my work as a community project, so any suggestions will be considered, and requests for scenes will be added - people just need to ask.

 I absolutely love the stuff you have posted so far. It's definitely made me want to put out something that's well written,mildly original and well something that could inspire and hopefully arouse which some might find a weird possibly. I don't think so as erotic content of all kinds ultimately should arouse the person indulging in that content.

This is not an excuse but I've been working solidly 65-75 hours a week for the last 10-12 weeks and feela bit worn out and ragged just now.

I do have an idea and though quite a simple one it's a little different but so far I've not been able to do it the justice I want it to have.

It could be quite good,memorable even if I can put it in a form that feels right OR it could be seriously turgid drivel if I can't breathe something extra into it. It's not coming out how I would wish but I've got a fortnights holiday in a couple of weeks so once I've had a chance to relax a bit I'm sure my creative juices may begin to flow and then I can get the  juices of the rest of you flowing lol.

Btw,I'm not suggesting I'm going to pen some Shakespeare,damn not even Dan Brown lol but a nicely written little story that,don't  take this wrong but inflame and excite some of my fellow eliters for a few minutes (again,I hope saying that doesn't sound off in anyway).

To hell with it,I'll just say it as it is. I read both your chapters and we can critique the prose all day long but it got my blood pressure and heart rate right up which has a similar effect on a typical man's equipment and I may or may not felt the need to relieve that situation.

I hope that idea is not in anyway something that would offend as it's true and the mark of real success for any piece of erotica surely has to be it's ability to have effects in the real physical world.

Yours really hit the spot and that has me really want to produce something that would in no way rival or outdo but compliment what you have done so far. 

And,umm have the same kind of effect on other eliters that it had on me.I've no issue with discussing such areas of the whole thing but I truly get why many guys don't like talking about that kind of stuff but if I can't produce something to entertain and make a few things erect then it's not worth putting out there

If you or anyone else thinks there's what you may say a little bit too much info in this reply then don't hesitate in say STF up,you'd need to go long,long way to offend me (maybe that's the problem then lol) so don't worry about that lol

Posted by: @sockitboy

 I absolutely love the stuff you have posted so far. It's definitely made me want to put out something that's well written,mildly original and well something that could inspire and hopefully arouse which some might find a weird possibly. I don't think so as erotic content of all kinds ultimately should arouse the person indulging in that content.

This is not an excuse but I've been working solidly 65-75 hours a week for the last 10-12 weeks and feela bit worn out and ragged just now.

I do have an idea and though quite a simple one it's a little different but so far I've not been able to do it the justice I want it to have.

It could be quite good,memorable even if I can put it in a form that feels right OR it could be seriously turgid drivel if I can't breathe something extra into it. It's not coming out how I would wish but I've got a fortnights holiday in a couple of weeks so once I've had a chance to relax a bit I'm sure my creative juices may begin to flow and then I can get the  juices of the rest of you flowing lol.

Btw,I'm not suggesting I'm going to pen some Shakespeare,damn not even Dan Brown lol but a nicely written little story that,don't  take this wrong but inflame and excite some of my fellow eliters for a few minutes (again,I hope saying that doesn't sound off in anyway).

To hell with it,I'll just say it as it is. I read both your chapters and we can critique the prose all day long but it got my blood pressure and heart rate right up which has a similar effect on a typical man's equipment and I may or may not felt the need to relieve that situation.

I hope that idea is not in anyway something that would offend as it's true and the mark of real success for any piece of erotica surely has to be it's ability to have effects in the real physical world.

Yours really hit the spot and that has me really want to produce something that would in no way rival or outdo but compliment what you have done so far. 

And,umm have the same kind of effect on other eliters that it had on me.I've no issue with discussing such areas of the whole thing but I truly get why many guys don't like talking about that kind of stuff but if I can't produce something to entertain and make a few things erect then it's not worth putting out there

If you or anyone else thinks there's what you may say a little bit too much info in this reply then don't hesitate in say STF up,you'd need to go long,long way to offend me (maybe that's the problem then lol) so don't worry about that lol

 

 

Don't worry, I didn't find any of it offensive. I am glad you have enjoyed my story so far, the next chapter is still being written and hopefully it will be as good as the first two. I'm glad you're working on your own stuff, I'd be very interested in reading it should you upload it.