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Chapter 3 now available! The third chapter, called The Harem, explores just that. Two men and four girls - enjoy! Chapter four is about to be started, although admittedly I am still struggling with ideas for it - if you have any suggestions please tell me.

I've been working on chapter four. It may be the most ambitions one so far, and there are new characters that Johnny meets.

Lucy Johnny scene reminded me of my first sex...we both were virgins that time. But unlike lucy johnny story..there was blood pain nervousness .. but it was awesome...i can share whole story if you guys interested 

Yeah, feel free to share your story. Admittedly I haven't been doing much work on the story lately but the chapter yet to be released is mostly finished, it just needs the final touches to be added.

Sorry for the long wait, I've been quite busy. Here is chapter 4, the longest chapter so far. Its main purpose is to set up future chapters unfortunately, but there should be something worth reading even if you have no interest in the story.

Nice work man...

I've read all the chapters.  

But in my personal opinion no need to further stretch the story. Try something different with new characters. One more thing add more details about the figures of characters like size color dress.. anyways its just my personal opinion 

Thanks for the feedback the compliments!

When you talk about stretching the story, do you mean stop writing or the more likely answer that you'd prefer if I spent less time focusing on the story in future chapters. As for the latter, in my head I like to have the story so that everything that happens has context, and I find it makes me more attached to the characters. By no means are they good characters but I like them anyway. I will likely do more with the relationships between them later on unless more people want me to focus less on them.

As for trying new things with new characters, two new characters were introduced in the last chapter, Ty and Andrine. The next chapter is actually inspired by Elite Babes because Ty and Johnny start a photography studio and Andrine is the first model for it - I'm to base the shoot on ones available here.

As for more details, that is noted and I will try to do that more in the future.

If you have any suggestions for chapters, characters, encounters, locations, or anything else relating to the story please tell me, I always love seeing what people have to say and I will absolutely implement suggestions.

Actually i want some new story...

Basically i m not into having sex with more partners or sex as a show. I really love romantic stories with two characters. But it should be intense romantic

U can continue your story its really nice 

I had a plan for a romantic Emma/Johnny storyline, perhaps based on dreams I had for a romantic getaway. I had sort of abandoned the plan but I'll add it back to the to-do list now you've asked for it.

Here's the next chapter for those interested.

The next chapter is much more romantic, and I'll be uploading it later today.

Posted by: @electrostar

The next chapter is much more romantic, and I'll be uploading it later today.

Waiting for it 

I'm not home yet, expect it in at least two hours' time.

Here it is!